My possessive bodyguard Epub Ü My possessive Epub /

this book was Amazing it was fun for me to read i wouldn't spent my day any way better then snuggling and reading it the story was new and refreshing the caracters were young and exciting there was love drama adventure and even funny moments i really really enjoyed every minute of it ; i couldn't put it away ; i'm only sad that it ended because a great story should never end sloppy plot but a uick pleasant read It was a cringey plot but a cute read It was an easy read as well perfect for those who want to read a cheesy romance Cute story though Read on WattpadWell I'm a bit torn with this bookThe plotIt had an outline which I appreciated after all it was a chapter based Wattpad story but not much else It was meant to be a thriller mystery with a romantic subplot but it was lacking in the meat of the thriller mystery and the romance was rushed and took center stage I don't have a problem with hardcore romance you can see it a lot on my shelves I had difficulty with the way the book was not edited and cleaned out of mistakes and shit One of the biggest problems in the plot in my opinion was the reasoning which was weird and wonky or lacking altogether It came in the form of why did characters choose to do stuff that did not make sense why would they run away from New York and when found in Miami go back to New York instead of hiding someplace else? and in the form of how the author reasoned the driving force of the plot for example Nathan suddenly decided he'll pursue her in full force without even a thought about his job security pun not intended or how long they've actually know each other as a reader at first it felt as if the minute he is reassigned to Hannah he started flirting with her very professional and after knowing a bit of their history from his POV it was still weird they didn't even talk before she drunk kissed him if he weren't her bodyguard I'd say he was her stalker by this kind of behavior More will come in the characters part I like to forward the romance as much as the next person but my god that was fast It tried to create suspense towards this plot thread climax though not knowing what the climax was supposed to be sex? Marriage? Kids? Telling the parents?? First kiss? and every micro climax that happened had no real resistance or aftermath which made it feel not that important For example they had so much banter at first are they interested in each other are they not will they finally have the courage to kiss each other who will initiate when how what will be the circumstances and then beach party at night Nathan came and shoved away from Hannah a drunk dude who didn't understand the meaning of the word no Dark adrenaline he's high from just waking up at her room without her he put his hands around her waist and pulls her close some flirty remarks are thrown into the air the feel of sand under her bare feet the sound of the ocean and wind blowing softly around their heating bodies Nathan says I would like to kiss you Next chapter Screams Oh they were laughing too it's okay Hannah steps away the hit dissipates a bit and she decides to go back to the house without accounting him Nathan at her feet they get inside dark Hannah walks fast in order to relax and he pulls her to him and kisses her Did you feel it? The suspense went away in the middle there It's sad when you can't work and tame the tension in your favor It could have been good enough to kill the tension momentarily with the screams initially the tension grows because the need for the action we wanted was not answered Another thing is that the kiss was met with very poor conseuences She woke up and felt embarrassed went to the fridge Nathan came to stand close to her said look at me for five times asked if she is going to ignore him every time they kiss would have worked better if she was the one initiating the kiss again and all is well conflict resolvedCharactersThe biggest problem with the characters was they were kind of boring and predictable Halfway through the book I found myself forgetting the names of the main characters it never happened to me beforeHannah was fine Not much to say about her except that it irked me she was letting Nathan say real possessive things to her as if she is a toy he doesn't want to share with minimal if any objection 'I don't like people to touch what's mine' He said in a low voice'Uh excuse me?''I'm being serious Hanna''You said the same thing about Patrick and you ended up as buddies''You're mine' He said ignoring my commentI smiled 'Okay' Also the fact that only half way through the book maybe even she finally had the revelation she did not know Nathan's last name after starting a relationship with him after having sex with him multiple times I realized at that moment there are a lot of things she doesn't bother to know about him like when they go visit his family and she doesn't even know his mother's name so she stands there in front of her 'Happy to meet you Mrs ' like a stupid uncaring wifeNathan The make you mine part – my Hannah so fast in the story now you're truly MINE after having sex ooh that was tough to get through – I did not appreciate that He had some nice ualities too but he needed to lean that the possessiveness is not some kind of cuteexy uirk but a flaw he needs to work on They both did not see any flaw in the other person That is not the recipe for a good prospering relationship When the blinding infatuating phase will fade they would feel they stand before an entirely different person because it has flaws all of a sudden something they weren't open for the other to have hehe is perfectThe character I was most perplexed by was Christina her mother I did not understand her motivation for most things she did and she just didn't feel real I did not believe her and her existence EditingWas non existent Had editing flaws in both departments storytelling editing from the way the outline was supposed to become a story and to the nitpicky continuity errors and word editing the way a sentence is structured the choice of words and spellingStorytelling editing – the book did not give us the reasons to believe the motivation of the characters As I said before – why did they get back to New York from Miami? Because the outline needed us back in NY They could think of a new hiding place Nathan proved himself capable of protecting Hannah why the author did not explore the possibility of their romance distracting him from protecting her is beyond me this would be a good reason to come back to NY where there are bodyguards that will keep her safe Besides that there were so many continuity errors getting up after standing the entire time taking steps closer when they were already standing near each otherWord editing – I can't even begin to tell you how many times I had to change the tense of a verb in my head to fit the sentence structure Suddenly a present tense in the middle of a past tense sentence I'm not some English expert especially because it's not my first language but if you decide to publish something at least skim through it looking for obvious mistakes and try to avoid them He had a desk with papers and his laptop was openedCh 23 'You know just so you know I would have taken responsibility' Ch 23Inside it is warm and it also seemed emptyCh 24He took off his shirt leaving him shirtlessCh 24 These were from two chapters only after I decided not to nitpick EVERYTHINGI enjoyed most from the sprinkled chapters from Nathan POV because they gave some background in a well structured way Jami knew how and when to give the background most relevant to the situation The parts she had some kind of flashbacks made me appreciate her because that's where I saw most clearly she didn't just open a document and wrote what came to mind she really cared for the story the world building and the characters she just needed to spend time editing it which would fix most of the book's issuesIn the end the story clearly had a skeleton of plot and characters but his meat was lacking and the skin was dry and broken It had things I did not feel ashamed of liking but also things that caught on my radar that I couldn't smooth out and forgetAn okay book light read keep your eyes open for red flags though Not all is good We need to talk he saysI look at the floor No we don'tI need you to look at me he whispers taking a step towards me Nathan Look at me he interruptsHe is being so demanding why is that so hotI sigh but force myself to look up and meet his gaze His green eyes look so troubledI need to know if this is how you're going to act every time I kiss you he says softly Because in that case I'll have to stop and believe me I don't want to he says gazing at my lipsYou realize that this is a bad idea right I ask himThere is a smile playing on his lips Is itI roll my eyes at him Yes a really really bad idea His hand goes to my cheek and he begins to stroke it with the back of his hand It doesn't feel that wayI grab his hand to make him stop doing that not wanting to fall into his charms but it's too late anyway You want to keep kissing me I whisperAll the time he says our lips are so close that I can feel them move against mine as he talksYou can't tell anyone about this I whisper closing my eyes About what he says closing the gap between us It's just a kiss This was one of the first books I read on wattpad and had popped into my recommendations and I was honestly hooked as soon as I read the first chapter itself I love romance and these two surely knew how to make me feel emotions and things I didn't even know I could feel I had butterflies through out the book and the author was honestly surprisingly very good at cliffhangers and keeping us at suspense My possessive bodyguard was a wonderful enthralling read that I have re read over a dozen times because I can't get enough of itThe writing is very good as well and even though some people might complain about the plot being cliche I absolutely loved it It kept me feeling all giddy and happy spoiler ehm clears throat and I loved that one steamy scene on the airplane Makes me want to be a member of the mile high club myself This book also made me appreciate men in suits and wish I could find myself a Nathan somehow Hannah's character was perfectly relatable just as it should be I could feel myself be in her shoes and see everything through her eyes All in all I loved all the cute romance the over the top drama in this book and wish that this can be turned into a damn movie someday because it is that amazing To be honest another Wattpad read just cause who doesn't bother pick up a Wattpad novel when they're bored as hell?? Anyway I sought to read this novel because I wanted something different yes it's romance so too bad if you're reading this review and you're already glaring at the title and cover on how cliche it maybe which it is I felt that while the novel took on a different approach from the bad boy era in these novels it somewhat felt uite repetitive as always there is some past history with one another or they have fallen in love cause they are in one another's lives A bodyguard and the only daughter of a famous actor is entangled in this love story I didn't enjoy it as much as I would in a realistic novel I felt that it was a rendition of the film The Bodyguard that had Whitney Houston in some ways The ending was just boring it lacked emotion I found My Possessive Bodyguard in my recommendations section and I can't say enough how much I love this book The plot climax storyline were all so perfect Nathan being so dominate and so profound made you want to read and Sadly to every book there's an ending But the feelings I got from reading this book will not end How the characters trusted each other and already committed themselves before they were dating is what I call trust And these characters trusted each other with their life on the line Whether it be Nathan losing his job or being away from Hannah or Hannah being kidnaped and tortured ; Anyways if you're looking for a heartwarming funny and a steamy book this one's for you I personally liked it the entire way An easy and simple read The plot was very good it has a little bit of everything I look for in a good book action romance suspence and all the restNathan is as of now the best character I ever read about I fell in love with every aspect of him And to my initial surprise she is kinda cute too and a good person not the classic girl that after a while you want to punchIn the future I'll read it again without a doubt This was my first Jamilexis Gallardo's book and won't be my last Nathan and Hannah's story is suspenseful sweet and sexy The storyline is fast paced and twisted I love the ending Connie Shabshab is a new narrator to me She has a great voice easy to understand She did a great job with the narration #AudiobooksUnleashed My possessive bodyguard

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